LilithIsGay's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Trouble]

Super funky tack! I love the breakbeats and the melody that comes in at 00:36. I also think the vocal samples fit the vibe perfectly.

My main point of criticism is that I think you’re using way too much reverb, especially on the bass. It makes the track feel kind of muddy and blurry, which I don’t think fits the funkiness at all. The reverb on the drums isn’t as bad, but you could probably pull it down a bit as well.

You’ve got a great track here, but it would be even better if it didn’t kind of sound like you’re listening to it from the club bathroom. Should be an easy fix though ^^
7/10

[hima_online ft. DJ MiLKTEA - acidity romance]

Very nice synths and pads! Especially the pads, they are *awesome*. 00:44 - 01:06 is just... so good. A heavily chopped and screwed drum break is a natural fit for this. That said, I do have some criticism to give about the drums.

I think you're actually going a bit to crazy with pitching the break. It sounds cool, but it happens so much constantly that I kinda get tired off it, which kind of relates to my second piece of criticism: the drums actually end up feeling a bit repetitive, despite the wild chops.

Personally, I think you should have made the drums less wild in some parts, which would address both problems. It would make the crazy parts more impactful while also adding some variation.

Overall, I think this is a nice, atmospheric (yet intense) track which doesn't quite reach it's full potential. Keep it up and you'll be making some truly amazing stuff in no time ^^

7.5 / 10 (Rounded up to four stars)

jbhimawari responds:

i actually kinda dislike this track, which is why it only got released on the Deluxe version of the album.